POETRY- MY BEST FRIEND

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By thelyricwriter

First off, thank you for your time. This poem reflects on the special relationship between a man and a woman when they are in love. We all have our ups and downs in any relationship. Bur through the wind and rain, love shines through the grey skies and prevails. Once again, thank you for your time and I hope you enjoy this poem titled, "My Best Friend". If you have the extra time, there is a link at the bottom that has other poems that I have written.

In the darkness


You are my light


In my weakness


You are my fight


If I am ever lost


You guide the way


You are the reason for


Who I am today


You are my shelter


Whenever it rains


When I am hurt


You can ease the pain


You bring joy to my life


With just a simple smile


You are the one


That made my life worthwhile


I still remember the first time


I looked into your eyes


It took only a short time


For me too realize


You were the one for me


Nobody could take your place


Time has no limits


In this heart you remain


Engraved into my life


A fire that burns out of control


An everlasting love


From the depths of my soul



With every day that passes


I only love you more


You give me the inspiration


To always do more


Always love one another


As if it was the last day


A single second is not granted


In an instant it can be gone away


So hold me close now baby


Promise to never let go


Your the love of my life


Your love is all I know


Thank you babe for everything


Even though you ask "what for"


I wouldn't be me without you


I could never wish for more


You offered to lift me up


When I was on my knees


A heart barely beating


Struggling just to breathe


You gave me hope with love


Our hearts have become one


As I think about when


My life with you begun


I wouldn't change a thing


Or what could have been


You will always be my love


My world, my life, my best friend






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Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

Gypsy Rose Lee Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Now that's what I call a poem. It was so beautiful. Loved it.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you so much Gypsy. I am not on here as much as before due to work, sorry for the late visit. I enjoy your company very much. Best wishes.

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Vinaya Ghimire Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Friendship is such a wonderful thing that it is often said you can also be a friend with your parents. These beautiful words remind me of love and friendship.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Vinaya, thanks for coming by my friend and thanks for the comment.

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

TLW I read through this poem twice, I enjoyed it so much once was not enough. Lol

It is beautiful. For the one you love to also be your best friend is the perfect love. It soesn't always happen that way, but when it does it is soooo right.

Loved it and voted up and awesome and beautiful

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blaise25 Level 4 Commenter 6 months ago

True love and the joy it brings. This is beautiful.

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Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 6 months ago

This Breath Of Love,

Is Sent From Above...

A beautiful choice of words and imagery thelyricwriter.;)

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Ghaelach Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi TLW.

I think i can speak for a great many hubbers and say you took the words right out of our mouths.

A wonderful poem.

Take care and have a nice day.

LOL Ghaelach

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sweethearts2 Level 4 Commenter 6 months ago

Beautiful words that describe what perfect love feels like. "Engraved into my life."

Wonderful poetic passion.

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makusr Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

thelyricwriter,

Greetings from MAKUSR. So many qualities your friend has and that you can see them also make a good pair. Very emotional piece friend and voted up!

With warm wishes,

MAKUSR

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mary615 Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

I love the line: "I wouldn't be me without you", that says it all. Another beautiful poem. Reminds me of one I wrote for my best friend after she had a stroke. Check that one out when you have the time. Hope you day is wonderful, see you around....

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Hyphenbird Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

This is very encouraging and inspiring, a tribute to love. Some of these lines or even the entire poem could be spoken as wedding vows.

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Nell Rose Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi, I agree with Hyphenbird, these would be great for a wedding, or even set to music, lovely!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Rosemay, thank you very much for everything. Coming from a great poet as yourself, I am very humble. Thanks for your time, comment, and vote. I will see you soon, take care:)

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Hello Blaise. Thanks you very much for talking the time out to read it. I am very thankful:) Best wishes.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Mentalist, it is always great to hear from you. You are such a special talent, a very unique poet that is. I am fortunate to have such great friends. Take care

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Ghaelach. thank you very much for your comment and kind words. You are very considerate and compassionate my friend. Thanks for everything.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Sweethearts, I am so grateful for your visit and comment. Your words described this poem perfectly. Thank you for your time and comment. It is always GREATLY appreciated:)

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Makusr, thanks for taking the time out of your busy schedule to come by and visit this poem. You are a man that understands my poems and a loyal friend. Many thanks to you.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Mary, thank you for coming by and having a read. I always appreciate your valuable time over here. Thank you and I hope Baby is feeling better today. Bless you both.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Hyphenbird, thank you for your sweet comment and kind words. This was actually inspired by my wife and written for her. She is my best friend. This poem could be for anyone from partners to best friends. Thanks for the comment.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Thanks for your visit Nell. I have always wrote lyrics instead of poetry, even though they are very similar. I have yet to post any of my songs, but I feel like I will. I believe I write the song first, then it becomes a poem. I am trying to say my lyrical side is always first, poetry second.

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Happyboomernurse Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

This one nearly brought a tear to my eye. It was so breathtakingly heartfelt and so reminded me of the way I feel about my husband of 37 years!

Love it and also the accompanying photos. Voted up across the board except for funny. You are such a gifted poet.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

HBN, thank you for your kind and inspirational words. I am glad you were able to relate to it in the form of your husband. That is what makes my poetry worthwhile, when others can read it and say, "that sounds like me". You have always been very supportive to me HBN and I thank you for that. Thanks for everything:) See you soon.

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Alastar Packer Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Your a born romantic lyric. Beautiful. "Always love one another- As if it was the last day- A single second is not granted- In an instant it can be gone away." These are words of wisdom we should pay heed to every day. This ones from the heart.

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qlcoach Level 4 Commenter 6 months ago

Yes to the power of Love. Very melodic and heartfelt poem. I kept asking myself, are these lyrics to a song? Thank you so much for following me. I search for the process that provides us balance between mind, body, and spirit. Peace and Light...Gary.

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b. Malin Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

This is such A Beautiful Tribute to your Loved one. I liked the introduction that you say, we've had our ups and downs...and then you go on to Introduce us to such Wonderful Poetry . These are the words that Love is made of. I'm Voting it UP!

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PADDYBOY60 Level 5 Commenter 6 months ago

Very nice!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Alastar, thank you so much for your thoughtful comment and your perspective on me is true. I have always been an old romantic. I wrote this one to my wife, one of many. She is my best friend. Thanks for everything Alastar. Take care:)

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Hey there Gary. I am honored to follow my friend. You are a profound writer. I just began writing poetry on the hubs. I always write lyrics, so I guess it is lyrical poetry. Thanks for coming by though and I look forward to your work.

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

This is beautiful, depicts a perfect love...

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WillStarr Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Excellent sentiments! Well done.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

B. Malin, thank you so much for coming by and commenting, plus your kind words. It is a great feeling when others comment on my poems. Thanks a bunch and see you soon.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

PaddyBoy, thanks for reading the poem. I appreciate your time. Best to you.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

AE, thank you for your kind words my friend. It means a lot. This is my passion, lyrics first and poems second.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Thanks for coming by Will and for your time and comment. I admire your thoughtful words my friend. Your an accomplished writer, so it means a lot when you view my poetry. Thanks and see you soon.

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mary615 Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

I told Baby you were thinking of her, and wished her well! Thanks so much. She is feeling a little better now, just getting MORE spoiled.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Mary, I am so glad she is feeling a little better. I hate to see anyone or any animal in pain as she has been. She is a beautiful dog and I guarantee she is SPOILED by mommy!lol

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi TLW, absolutely beautiful! and the pictures perfect.

This is stunning work and voting up.

Thank you.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

MM, thank you for your kind words my dear friend. Those od us that have been in love can relate to the words in this onw. I am so glad you liked it. Thank you so much MM. See you soon.

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Eiddwen 6 months ago

So very beautiful. up up and away!!!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Eiddwen, thanks for stopping by to read it and I am glad you thought it was beautiful. Take care.

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Beautiful, touching, romantic, sweet, and inspirational.

I could go on but I will sum it up in three words. I love it!

Voted up, up and away!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Sueswan, thanks for coming by and your beautiful comment and words:)

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

beautiful. Touching without being sappy. Good work here! Thanks for sharing!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

PDX, thank you for your comment my friend. Hope all is well and I am on my way over. Take care:)

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Peggy W Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

How very beautiful. My husband is also my best friend and we have passed our 41st wedding anniversary together. We are each other's anchor during sunny days and also stormy weather. Your poetry could have been written for many of us...judging from the comments. Up votes except for funny. Thanks!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 6 months ago

Hey there Peggy:) Thanks for coming by. You have your own personal beautiful story Peg. Congrats on 41 and I wish you far more. It is a great feeling. I am so glad you can relate to this poem Peg. Best wishes.

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DeBorrah K. Ogans Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

thelyricwriter, MARVELOUS! I am most grateful that I can truly say from the depth of my heart I KNOW this to be TRUE! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! Thank you for sharing, In HIS Love, Grace, Joy, Peace & Blessings!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 5 months ago

Deb, thanks for coming by and for your kind words. I can relate to that. I am glad you could read this and relate to it. That is what it is all about. Makes me happy:) God Bless Deb and keep doing your thing.

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sofs Level 7 Commenter 4 months ago

thelyricwriter,I am so glad you came by, I would never have seen or read such poetry. This is beautiful, amazing poetry. It stirs my souls and fills me with such a pure feeling of love. It is so wonderful to love someone so..and I can relate to this so well :) May your love last forever !!

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago

thanks for the visit, lyric writer. I hope your new year has been splendid thus far

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 4 months ago

Sofs, thank you for taking the time to come by and read this poem. I am touched by your comment for certain. Love is great when it is "true". It is one of the best feelings in the world.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 4 months ago

PDX, so far, so good. I am still in the foundation part of a few different programs and ideas, so we will have to see what happens. Still trying to get into the country music scene as a writer. Hopefully I can create some income that will allow me to have extra time to do so. Hope your has been well also PDX. Best wishes.

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htodd 4 months ago

Thanks for the nice post..Doing poetry requires lots of imagination

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 4 months ago

Htodd, thanks for coming by and reading this poem. It does to a sense. I have went through a lot, which inspires what I write. I also put myself in other peoples shoes if possible.

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

lyric writer, I know a lot of musicians so if I ever find one looking for a songwriter, I'll keep you posted. I know a lot about the music business but, unfortunately, I don't know a lot about selling tunes. I would recommend scanning craigslist and your local bars for new and emerging artists. Or, you could do what Neil Diamond did and just sing the songs yourself :-)

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 3 months ago

I appreciate that very much. I can write and sing, good enough for a demo. I can write a complete song in 10 minutes unedited. Just wish I could get lucky and get a chance just once.

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

it's all about who you know. too bad u don't live closer and we didn't meet ten years ago. . I used to be quite connected

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 3 months ago

I tell you, I don't post my good stuff, but I know I could make it with the right people in my corner.

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Sky9106 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Great to read this revealing exactly what you feel inside for someone , that's what makes all the sense when you can speak the truth about things especially those feelings you harbor.

Thanks for sharing , I sent you an e/nail .

Bless.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 3 months ago

Sky, thanks for dropping by my friend. I appreciate you pointing that out for me. Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

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John Sarkis Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Great poem thelyricwriter. I really enjoyed it. Voted up

John

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 3 months ago

John, glad to have you come by and thanks for your time and vote. I appreciate your kind words.

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nighthag Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

Ah the beauty of being in love with your best friend,

This was a a beautiful heartfelt poem that was simply lovely to read.

thank you so much for sharing it

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 3 months ago

Nighthag, thanks for taking the time to read this poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. It means a lot. Take care friend.

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Mekenzie Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

You speak from the heart, and I like that! Beautiful Poem Lyric!

Mekenzie

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 3 months ago

Mekenzie, thank you so much for taking the time to come by. Poetry is easy when one writes from the heart:)

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iamaudraleigh Level 6 Commenter 7 weeks ago

Your poem is one of the most beautiful things I have seen on hub pages! I voted up and shared! It was beautiful!!! I wish I had written it myself.

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tammyswallow Level 8 Commenter 7 weeks ago

Beautiful words! This poem would be wonderful for someone renewing their vows. I am moved. Wonderful!

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coffeegginmyrice Level 4 Commenter 7 weeks ago

Very nice! Sweet friendship that brings a man and a woman the joy of companionship that comes with bountiful understanding, ignites a hundred times to form one burning flame which is LOVE.

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 7 weeks ago

*Iamaudraleigh, thanks for taking the time to read this, comment, and share it. I really do appreciate your kind words. Take care.

*Tammy, always great to hear from you. I am very pleased that you liked it. Thanks for coming by and take care.

*Coffeegginmyrice, thanks for taking the time to read my poem. You have said it perfectly. Thanks again and see you around.

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AudreyHowitt Level 7 Commenter 6 weeks ago

It is wonderful when we feel like this about another--you captured these feelings so well! Lovely write!

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thelyricwriter Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Audrey, thanks again for taking the time to drop by. Glad you enjoyed it:)

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Deborah Brooks 28 hours ago

I love poetry and I love this.. just beautiful writing abut your best friend that you are in love with. that's the way it should be

blessings

Debbie

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